@binatangmakasalanan appreciate the listen and the constructive criticism. thanks man.

@tyboy540 to improve the ability to be good, sometimes you need to absorb your mistakes so next time it will be perfect.... like i want to download it and play it in the restaurant where i am working so everyone can hear it. but how if there is too much talk...... then next time they can apply better...... i am not against with them. i like them more if there are no more talk in the beginning of the song. i respect them too. but even those famous and rich celebrities applies what the masses want

its too corny... too much talk in the intro.